macdibble ([info]macdibble) wrote,
@ 2007-10-03 21:06:00
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MacDibble Script Writer?
It's true! I've had a play placed at the Australian Script Centre.


I wrote the play a few years ago for my son's Grade 1/2 class. The school needed a script for 50 children that was fun and easy to do, and they couldn't find any so they asked me to create a play. Which I did. It is a muddled up fairytale comedy called "The Other 'Other' Tale of the Three Little Pigs".


When they asked me to give it to them again for production this year, I realised that there were probably hundreds of schools who needed plays using large numbers of children but traditional playbooks were out because schools can't afford 50 copies of the same book. Sherryl Clark suggested Ozscript and while I initially thought the age group was too young for Ozscript to be interested, they contacted me and asked me to submit anyway.


"The Other 'Other' Tale of the Three Little Pigs" was produced for the second time, a couple of weeks ago by the local primary school at the highschool hall. All the reviews so far seem to be good:


"My favourite scene was scene three, 'Still Near a Forest". I felt happy at first and confident. In the play the fairy godmother was pretty and cinderella was too! I was a narrator". Divya, Grade 2.


"I like scene 3 because I have the most words in the scene. I feel very very Happy! I like the scene becasue there are lots of characters. I was dressed in a pink dress, 2 pink wings, and a pink crown." Karen, Grade 1


"Scene ten was my favourite because everyone laughed at Rock- Bottom bob when he said “Dead! Bring out your dead! Half price removals!” and Grim Reaper said, “He’s dead on time.” That was funny and excellent." Peter, Grade 2


This has been a wonderful experience for all involved. I have found working with a script that has allowed me to involve up to 60 children to be very unique. The play is funny and enjoyable and at no time did the children lose interest. They enthusiastically learned their lines and took on understudy roles. They were able to develop their acting and speaking skills to a very high level.
The children have thoroughly enjoyed their experience and benefitted greatly from it.
Helen, teacher.











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POV
(Anonymous)
2007-10-04 12:23 pm UTC (link)
Would certainly like to examine the script for POV discrepancies. With that many speaking parts, who knows who could be telling the story.
Dan

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Re: POV
[info]macdibble
2007-10-04 11:36 pm UTC (link)
Exactly!

You know my kids think the Dune movie is hilarious because the characters "think" as well as speak via some corny zooming in on faces and softly whispered lines with no lips moving. I don't think it's possible to replicate that on stage.

In actual fact there are two Narrators in this play. One has the side of the audience and tries to tell the fairytale the way we all know it... and the other corrects him/her and tells the story the way it's really going.

ie. "They hadn't gone very far when they met a man selling sticks."
"Actually... they went to Coles (supermarket)."

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Uh, oh!
(Anonymous)
2007-10-11 02:13 pm UTC (link)
Uh, oh! Came across this book on a recommended reading list for Chicago 8th Graders: _The True Story of the Three Little Pigs by A. Wolf_ by jon sciezka. Not drawing any conclusions, you understand, but, once you discount the half-world separation and then take into consideration the availability on Amazon.com, seems a mite suspicious. OTOH, imagining that you have read every YA book ever produced seems a bit of stretch as well.
Grinning evilly, I remain,
Your Super-Secret Admirer
Dan

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Re: Uh, oh!
[info]macdibble
2007-10-11 02:35 pm UTC (link)
That's a completely DIFFERENT tale. Mine is the Other OTHER tale. Besides titles aren't copywriteable and I doubt they managed to squeeze a Salesman, the Grim Reaper and an entire Blind-Mice Band into their story. Who in their right mind would do that to a story about three little pigs?

The Storybook Wolves is a great story if you have any kids to read to. They love that one.

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Congratulations
[info]jdmills
2007-10-15 09:03 pm UTC (link)
Congratulations on those great reviews and your achiement.
I wish the photots were bigge, I'd love to see them better.
I know nothing of the Australian script centre, so I'll have to follow your link to have a look.

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Re: Congratulations
[info]macdibble
2007-10-16 10:33 am UTC (link)
Thanks Jenni, it's a little hard to figure out the script centre site at first.
I'd like to make the photos bigger but you know how it is posting photos of other people's children these days... permissions required, custody orders, etc etc. All a bit dodgy.
Trust me tho, they all looked very cute and colourful. It's a play all about participation and getting laughs so that every kid gets to feel like an entertainer for the night and it really shows on their faces.

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